Whisper, Purple, Fields (Haiku Challenge)

Was messin’ with “haiku tiles” with a friend. :”>

I whisper your name
wand’ring through purple tulips
on November fields.

Brian Sarfati


The doe sprints across
the purple fields, panting, free—
roses whisper love.

– Jashaél

Brian: Woooooo! That’s cool!
Roses whisper love.
My fave line.

Now I feel like making a combined haiku:

Roses whisper love

On November fields.

We’ll see what he’s got someday, if he ever remembers. Haha…


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